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Screenplay development that goes beyond notes

Story SOS identifies what's holding your screenplay back - then develops practical, creative solutions to make your story stronger.

Premise • Character • Structure • Dialogue • Treatment • Polish • Rewrite

THE PROBLEM

You already know something isn't working

Maybe your second act drags.

Maybe your protagonist isn't compelling enough.

Maybe the premise has potential, but the story isn't delivering on it.

Maybe the dialogue feels unnatural.

Maybe you've received feedback telling you what the problems are - but nobody has told you what the hell to do about them.

That's where Story SOS comes in.

Traditional script coverage often identifies weaknesses.

Story SOS goes a step further.

We identify the problem, understand why it isn't working, and develop creative solutions for what the story could become.

THE BIG DIFFERENTIATOR

DON'T JUST GET NOTES. GET SOLUTIONS.

Traditional Coverage

“The protagonist needs a stronger goal.”

Story SOS

“The protagonist's goal disappears after the first act, which is why the middle of the screenplay loses momentum. Here are three ways we could restructure the story to give them an active objective…”

That's what we're offering.

Not just:

PROBLEM

but:

PROBLEM → WHY → POSSIBILITIES → SOLUTION

OUR APPROACH TO STORYTELLING

From concept to final polish, Story SOS provides comprehensive support for every stage of your screenplay's journey. We believe in empowering writers with actionable insights and development treatments that truly elevate their work.

STORY DIAGNOSIS

We'll find out what works and what doesn't.

STORY RESCUE (Recommended)

We'll provide you with a revised treatment for your story

SCRIPT POLISH

We'll clean up and tighten your story so it has the biggest impact.

DIALOGUE PUNCH-UP

We'll sharpen your characters voices so they sound natural, believable and they flow.

SCRIPT REWRITE (Premium Package)

We'll diagnosis, treat and fix the story with a rewrite.

YOUR SCRIPT STAYS YOURS

YOUR STORY IS YOURS.

Your screenplay is your work, and it stays that way.

Anything you submit to Story SOS is treated with confidentiality and respect. I don't claim ownership of your screenplay, and your material will never be shared publicly or used as a case study without your permission.

I also screen projects before accepting them to help identify potential conflicts with material I'm already developing.

Your script. Your ideas. Your ownership.

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READY TO ELEVATE YOUR STORY?

Take the next step in your screenwriting journey. Explore our packages and discover how Story SOS can help you achieve your creative vision.

SEND AN SOS

Send your story:

-- Project Title

-- Format

-- Genre

-- Logline/Premise

-- Story Summary

To:

storysos333@gmail.com

 

*** If selected, then a PDF and FDX file of your screenplay